Ventus Calum [Fin]

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Ventus Calum

Dont weep for the stupid;you will be crying all day!

Hand of the king

Labrynna

Hylian

TRIFORCE of Courage

MAle

24

Heterosexual

THEME

PERSONALITY

Enigmatic at best, Ventus is a strange young man. Calm and confident the young man seems to never take anything seriously and is always found smiling and/or laughing about something. He is very friendly and has a playful personality with a good sense of humor. A bit of a trickster he tends to joke with and tease those he calls his friends quite a bit. Towards those he finds attractive, he is also quite a bit of a flirt. He is also rather free-spirited and will do or at least try many things once just for the fun or thrill of them. His friendly demeanor makes him easy to get along with and as such he doesn't have trouble making friends.

He enjoys peaceful locations to relax in and the types of atmospheric music that can enhance his relaxation. He also enjoys card games and other similar games of skill. Being the tricky type that he is, Ventus enjoys these games atmosphere of trying to observe the opponent and successfully outwit them. The young man is fond of sweets but dislikes spicy foods. He won't turn down alcohol, but is not a heavy drinker and will never allow himself to become intoxicated.

Despite his friendly and overall fun-loving personality, Ventus is rather reticent. He doesn't like to talk about his past, nor does he have anything he owned from back then. he keeps most of his serious emotions to himself and unless continuously prodded by a trusted friend about things, he will continue to hide behind his playful, calm, and friendly persona. This is mainly because he views all of his problems as his own to atone for and/or deal with. This is despite the fact he has no problem helping others, at least those he has let in to become his friends, with their own problems. This gives him a somewhat hypocritical outlook on his social life. That all said, were someone to work their way past his emotional armor and truly become his trusted friend they will find a fiercely loyal companion within him.

In an additional contrast to his nature, although he often teases others and is flirtatious he himself is not susceptible to it. That is to say, Ventus is actually quite shy when it comes to emotional attachment and affection deep down, so though he can dish it out, but he can't take it.

LIKES [attr="class","scroll"] Women Alcohol Gambling Dueling if it's long	DISLIKES [attr="class","scroll"] Liars Disrespect Death
MOTIVATIONS [attr="class","scroll"] Honor Power Love Vengeance	FEARS [attr="class","scroll"] Failure The Unknown Loss

HISTORY

Will Add in at a later date

APPEARANCE

INVENTORY

Please take a look at our Inventory Shop! Upon creation you may start with ONE item/magic that is available at 1 Triforce Shard.

All members are also given one common weapon for free. If you choose to buy magic with your free slot, you may enchant your weapon.

WEAPON

Rank: Common
Type: Sword
Handling: two handed
Description: The greatsword from the hilt to the tip was 5'1 inches long and about 8inches wide near cross gaurd to about 3 inches at the tip. It was nothing special just castle made steel.

MAGIC
If you have opted out of using magic for another item slot, simply erase this and put the item you wish to use.

MAGIC TYPE: What type of magic is it? Elemental (what element), Arcane, etc.
NAME:Name of the Magic Spell
RANK: Common, Uncommon, Rare, or Legendary?
CLASS: Offensive/Defensive/Etc.
DURATION/COOLDOWN: Please post how long this spell lasts and what the cooldown is per SC (spell caster) POST.
DESCRIPTION: A general idea of what your spell does. Please include the range, how it effects your character and others, etc.

TRAITS

Upon creation, characters will be given a certain amount of points to place into crucial fields in the form of labeling terms: Novice (1), Apprentice (2), Journeyman (3), Adept (4), Master (5). Characters will also be given 4 blanks fields where they may place traits that are more oriented to their specific character.

Characters will be given the opportunity to reach a specific rank and upgrade their skill list as well as receive a new skill field.
If you include a history, it will be possible to earn more points upon approval by staff.

You have a total of 38 points to spend across these traits. PLEASE USE THE WORD TERMS. NOT THE POINT NUMBER. (i.e. use the term 'novice' instead of '1').

Diplomacy:Master
Social Etiquette:Master
Intimidation:
Persuasion:Master
Tactics/Leadership:Master
History/Religion:
Geography:Adept
Arcana:Master
Weapon Proficiency:Journeyman
Hand to Hand:
Endurance:Master
Stealth:
Acrobatics:
Horse Riding:Novice
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PLAYER ALIAS: Ventus
FACE CLAIM: Lagi El Nagil -- Wand of Fortune
REFERENCE: Google
ALTS: N/A

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roleplay sample

IT'S TIME TO PROVE MYSELF!

The Kings Dilemma is also the Hands

Ventus could see the painstakingly obvious signs of stress grace his young kings furrowed brow; as Perseus rested his elbows on the table while his chin rested firmly on the palms of he while he seemed to glower over the map laid out before him. The tiny pins almost creating a topographical outline of the areas that they pressed into the map. Ventus himself had been studying the map, however, he was not near as stressed about it something the king was likely painfully aware of. Ventus rarely stressed out about much of anything as there was always a solution to the problem even if that solution happened to send people to their doom. "What would you have me do? Allow Hyrule to fall completely or lose our sea borders to the Zoran people? Symmetry City calls for aid." Ventus heard the king; ask as he too glanced up from the map looking directly at Perseus. Ventus paused for a moment as he thought things over, this was indeed a tough decision one of which would have grave implications no matter the choice or decision. Ventus pressed his right index finger firmly against his lips as he placed his thumb under his slightly scruffy chin.

"Your Grace, perhaps we could accomplish both without moving troops from either area." he said rather confidently as he noticed the look of surprise and desperation on Perseus's face. " We could pull our forces scouting for zora back to Symmetry city, and have them bar the gates and prepare for a siege." he said as he rubbed back of his head while yawning due sleep deprivation though it was not obvious on his face Ventus could feel his head starting to grow heavy. "By doing this Symmetry city should have enough provisions to outlast a siege long enough for us to deal with the Hyrule invasion." He paused yet again as he looked to the king who was now leaning against the back of his chair nodding "Go on." Perseus said rather fervently " Well to be blunt your highness this plan would hinge on a swift and concise victory in Hyrule, a victory that would at least help the rebellion gain a firm foothold in the area. That would allow us to temporarily move a portion of our troops to swing up behind the Eleazar siege and crush them quickly." he paused yawning again " it's not the best plan your grace, but its better than losing one area to gain a foothold in another." he said with a cocksure smirk as he awaited the kings approval.

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YOU ARE APPROVED

FEEL FREE TO BEGIN PLOTTING

HOWEVER...SOME CONCERNS ABOUT YOUR APP

You are approved, but after reading your application, red flags are being tossed left and right. Let me just break this down --

• PERSONALITY: This is the primary source of my concern, considering the remainder of the app is lackluster. To be blunt, your character is full of contradictions. If that outcome is on purpose than by all means ignore this, however I doubt that was the intent due to the way it was written. To give some examples of what I mean;
  
  • Your opening sentence portrays that he is mysterious, puzzling, and by definition difficult to understand; yet the following description is opposite by comparison. The traits of his personality, i.e. friendly, confident, and fun, are all normal for a young man to possess and there is nothing strange about them.
  • You claim Ventus is easily able to make friends, calm and CONFIDENT, yet in the 3rd paragraph you say he is rather introverted? The definition of introvert is shy and reserved; Polar opposites. I understand that you only wished to imply that his behaviour in regards to his past could be seen as "introverted", but I personally wouldn't use that word. I'm also personally concerned that this is reflective of the missing history in your application. Correct, a history is not required, however on the other hand a history is important to not only the character but the roleplayer. A history defines a character's personality, motivations, fears, etc. The importance of these variables make or break characters, and without them, the will to write said character will diminish.
  • The last paragraph of your personality makes little to no sense overall. Likely due to minor grammatical errors, you might want to go over your application one more time to fix any mistakes. Anyways, to explain, in your words exactly; "although he often teases others and is flirtatious he himself is susceptible to it." I have a feeling you meant that he is NOT susceptible to it, otherwise it wouldn't make sense to structure your sentence like that.
• Looking past those contradictions, I am a bit apprehensive about the lack of example in your likes, dislikes, fears and motivations. They give little to no insight as to how your character will interact with others, or aim to achieve anything. This may not be important for some characters, but for the 'Hand of the King', it is quite the ordeal. What goals does Ventus have, and how would he achieve them? Is it beneficial to himself alone, or for the kingdom he serves? So many questions.
• I read your application and I can't help but picture Gin from season 1 of bleach....

Some other worry's I have about your application, while minor, they still spring some questions in my mind.

• Lets hope the length of his greatsword, isn't bigger than his body! Jokes aside, I was disappointed in the lack of effort in his appearance. We don't have a minimum in regards to 'appearance' but I would have liked to see maybe some description on how he would carry himself aesthetically since there was no mention of that in his personality.
• You have Master in Arcana but no magic? Also i'm going to assume that since you have no points in the other fields (not even novice) that he can barely preform them or recall any information on the subject. I expect to see this reflected in your posts.
• The RP sample was okay. If this is what we have to look forward to in your posts, -- I will make a suggestion; proper paragraphing saves lives. TDLR: You have alot of run on sentences.

This concludes my review! Due to the obvious absence of effort in some parts of your application, You are rewarded with no extra trait points. After some time, ( which I suggest you spend getting to know your character some more ) please submit a upgraded application. I would love to see Ventus Calum blossom into something more than this. If you have questions you know where to ask; as for what's next: Keep an eye out for upcoming events, and/or create your plotter if you so wish. Otherwise there are many people on site that itch for threads.

-NOVA

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personality changes accepted