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A LEGEND OF ZELDA ROLEPLAY
Welcome to ZRP! We are an non-canon RP site with an original tale taking place within the
lore of the Zelda Franchise. While the events of this site are entirely non-canon, we take advantage of the canons of other
games to explain its story fully. As such, we are located within the CANON TIMELINE. Do you like what you see? If so, feel free
to register and join our story! If you have any questions, you can join our discord, located in our important links!
11/12/21 GUESS WHO'S BACK! Thats right, and we are cooking up a good ol reset for everyone. Please be patient as things will be a little empty as we archive. Pop into discord if you have questions.
This app will be locked and you are free to begin roleplaying! I think this is a rather spectacular application and I'm excited to see what you do with her. Have fun~
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[/strike] Okay but this is like, ultimate OTP. And Reading that dungeon alone I'm really in love with the portrayal of these two characters. Let alone every other damn thread you got. A+ ship, cutie patooties.[/ul]
This is such an awesome character, I'm really excited to see what she does here. I'll go ahead and lock this thread up and move it, you are free to start plotting and rping to your hearts content. I may recommend talking to Jade, our lovely head admin as they have the Rito Matriarch. This has me wanting to make a Rito too...
So everything is looking really good, but before I accept your character and throw you to the wolves there's just a few small things I'd like for you to do.
First, I noticed a few grammatical errors; run on sentences, weird commas...etc, they happen all the time, go ahead and just proofread over and tidy up some sentences. It's nothing major, just want to see Thafe looking her best!
And also, Thafe has some good likes and dislikes (not saying that because I'm Midna :3c) but if you could just give them a sentence or two description of why they're there and what they mean to her that'd be awesome!
You're almost there, and this seems like a very good character I look forward to seeing!
One last thing, go ahead and change the name of your account to your character name. The site has the ability to support multiple accounts under one email so you'll make a new account for each character.
You've made all the necessary changes, and thus your application has been accepted! Congratulations, your character will be locked and moved to the accepted thread. You are now able to join the rest of Termina. Have fun!
Alright, so this is a good start but there are some things we need to go over.
First, I'm noticing a lot of spelling and grammatical mistakes that need to be fixed. We hold ourselves to a higher standard than average. As such, we'd like to maintain our standards and I believe in you.
So, just a couple examples...
"Alastor is the most fearsome pirate to ever pirate terrorize the Great Bay" there's an extra 'pirate' in this sentence, rather simple.
"unable to deny his zoran roots any longer," the name Zora or Zoran should be capitalized as it is the name of a race of people.
There are also a few spelling mistakes like the spelling of Gerudo in a spot or two.
Next...
So, in the plot of our world there isn't any reason that someone who has resided only in Termina should know about the Twili. Their only way out of their realm is through the Twilight Mirror currently on the Isle of Gods. It's a small thing, but a canonical fact.
Also, Alastor's use of magic. Magic is something one earns and it isn't easy to just get, and it sounds like Alastor just suddenly develops this magic just in time to kill a bunch of people. And with the added piece that it is lightning based magic, the type that Zora are particularly weak to, I find this a little difficult to exist.
You also have a magical weapon and a magical ability, and both of those need to be discussed. You can only have one with a beginning character. Either a magical item because you give up your magic ability in creation to enchant an item, or you could have one, maybe two magic abilities within reason. As it stands, your profile does not have that currently and the magic you do have doesn't make sense and seems quite overpowered.
"Alastor has the ability to command electricity and conduct it safely through water, in order to create a barrier for protection or fire lightning bolts at his foes."
This one spell does two things, when it should only do one. Two different abilities are two different magics. Also, lightning conducts in water and as such it can't really be "safely controlled" it's why Zora are weak to it, water conducts electricity.
"...the guitar allows him to create wild electrical storms as he riffs on the guitar."
An electrical storm is a very powerful feat to be able to do, far too powerful for a base magic item. A lightning bolt, that would be fine. Not an entire storm. Please fix this so it is weaker as this is the beginnings of a character.
One last thing, your likes, dislikes...etc. need to be explained, we want to understand this character. Please go in depth, even just a couple sentences is all, to explain these items.
I look forward to seeing your edits and finalizing this character