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A LEGEND OF ZELDA ROLEPLAY
Welcome to ZRP! We are an non-canon RP site with an original tale taking place within the
lore of the Zelda Franchise. While the events of this site are entirely non-canon, we take advantage of the canons of other
games to explain its story fully. As such, we are located within the CANON TIMELINE. Do you like what you see? If so, feel free
to register and join our story! If you have any questions, you can join our discord, located in our important links!
11/12/21 GUESS WHO'S BACK! Thats right, and we are cooking up a good ol reset for everyone. Please be patient as things will be a little empty as we archive. Pop into discord if you have questions.
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Alright! The writing and grammar in this is very strong, but I see a couple of major points that should be brought up.
The issue with Ganondorf's blood is that in game, Ganondorf is not an actual demon, as his title may imply. He is merely a Gerudo thief who happens to be blessed by the Triforce of Power, and as such is not a supernatural entity. As such, there is no discernable reason his blood would bestow any degree of supernatural power.
If point one were to be doable, the Goddesses would not have any reason to meddle in the affairs of mortals, nor do we allow characters not already tied to them in canon to use them so heavily in their histories.
Since this is a major part of the history of your character, I would suggest stepping back and taking a look at what you have. As a whole, the character has a grand purpose that there's really not very much buildup to, other than a family history. Work to make it more original, and try to keep it where it's clear what conditions this power triggers on and what the power does when unlocked. We will have to police it to make sure it's not game-breaking, but if you need help, we're more than willing to assist you on the Discord.
Unless otherwise asked for, I'm giving you a week for edits.
The first rule of life Sekne learned is that all was not fair. Born to the Twili soon after the end of Zant’s rule, she was a member of a lower class than most, a poor family forced to resort to theft and crime to survive. She was the youngest of three children, and as the smallest, she fit easily into small holes and was quietest. Well, at least when she wasn’t talking. This put her in the role of stealth in the “family business”, stealing food or gold essential to their survival. She also got handy with a knife, and more than a few people were stuck with it.
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Despite her distaste for those above her, she was always fascinated in the Twilight Princess, a woman of such regality and grace that she admired very much. She always dreamed of being in that higher class of Twili, working for Midna, though her siblings were always quick to remind her that it was just wishful thinking. Needless to say, she got along with them just as much as she had to, and nothing more. She believed if she could climb her way up the ladder, she could reach that goal, and go where she felt she truly belonged. The first rung before her was finding work for the royal class, and this was accomplished via working menial jobs for them, such as housekeeping, dishwashing, and preparing food. She still kept up her petty thievery, and what little money she had went to her family’s well-being. She had bigger aspirations in mind.
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That plan was thrown into motion by the unlikely uprising of the followers of Zant. Though she found herself upset, she saw an opportunity to use this to her advantage, and as the regime settled in on the throne in Midna’s place, she made her presence known, offering her skills at thievery to their usage in exchange for food and shelter for her family. The deal was agreed to, with one more condition: she was to act as an assassin for them. She was given a special weapon, two balisong with the ability to turn into sickles, and was trained in the art of silent killing, often on traitors to the royals. She didn’t like it, but she was doing what had to be done to help her Princess. And, over the years, she acted as their ghost in the shadows, taking out targets from the smallest influence to the traitor royals, all to gain trust. And when she had it, and learned where Midna had gone, she stole what she needed to survive, and told her family to come with her. Except that they didn’t, and they called her a traitor. She was forced to run as her own siblings tried to end her life.
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With that, she ran to the Light World, the one place she thought nobody would dare to follow.
SPELL OR ITEM NAME: Balisong Pair: Two large knife-like swords, with collapsible blades that can change into a pair of sickles. [break][break]
RACIAL ABILITY: + Shroud: Twili have the ability to become one with the shadows around them, making them masters of stealth. They can hide in a shadow of any size while they are in the Realm of Light. [break][break] - Weak to Light: Twili are vulnerable to light based attacks and sunlight, taking extra damage from those kinds of magic. [break][break]
Congratulations to February 2018 OTM winners! The victors for each of the categories are displayed above and staff will label the winners prizes for this month.
CHARACTER OF THE MONTH: 1st place - goes to Eleazar Velyris † ! For getting first place they are awarded rupees, a triforce shard, or a random rare weapon determined by staff. PM Jade to choose your prize! Because there were multiple second places, no prize will be given to the runner up.
MEMBER OF THE MONTH: 1st place - goes to Kura Hyrule † ! For getting first place she is awarded rupees, a triforce shard, or a random rare weapon determined by staff. PM Jade to choose your prize! 2nd place - Navi ! She gets 100 rupees
THREAD OF THE MONTH: Thread of the month is Revelations! Please give it a read if you have not! Eleazar Velyris † , Kura Hyrule † , Artemis Hyrule , Perseus Elein are awarded rupees, a triforce shard, or a random rare weapon determined by staff. PM Jade to choose your prize! Second Place is Chasing Fairytales!Cetus , Circe , @thetis , and Eleazar Velyris † are all awarded 100 rupees
COUPLE OF THE MONTH: 1st place - finally! It's Link Queensguard and Zelda Hyrule ! For getting first place they are awarded with rupees, a triforce shard, or a random rare weapon determined by staff. PM Jade to determine your prize Second place - goes to Eleazar Velyris † and Cetus ! For getting second place they are awarded with 100 Rupees!
Welcome! We're excited to have you, especially with such a precious cherub for a faceclaim. If you wanna talk to us easier (if you already haven't joined it), here's a Discord link for you. discord.gg/H9usqqv We're pretty active there, so feel free to hop on!
Veltuzar has been accepted! Wreak havoc on the Light World to your heart's desire, if you can. Feel free to start having him pop up and do things on site
Alrighty, we've got some work to do. You have a good start, but you need a little bit more to inch yourself over that finish line.
The first thing that stands out to me is there are parts of your profile that you seemed to have forgotten to complete, including, but not limited to, your weapon description. Let's go ahead and add the rest of the relevant information to those.
In addition, I spotted some grammatical issue in the app itself. I'm stuck on mobile right now, so I can't give every example, but here's one that stands out especially.
"Though despite this sadness is a rarely shown by her, Sky coming to accept that bad things happen and that it is best to move on and keep going then needlessly cry over the past."
This either seems like two thoughts mashed together, or one thought poorly worded. It also bounces between past and present tense.
A good example of fixing this would be:
"Though she rarely shows this sadness, Sky has learned to accept that bad things happen and that it is best to move on and keep going, rather than needlessly cry over the past."
In addition, you did not meet word count minimum on personality. Revise that.
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With that, the major stuff is out of the way, so there's a couple minor nitpicks.
1) You must have a kingdom listen. It needs not be who you serve, but it does need to be where your character hails from.
2) Your stalfos raising ability can lose the seconds on them, and you can just use the post duration instead. This is a personal question myself, but what happens if she has no access to skeletons or bones in general? Can she just not raise stalfos? Also, how does a stalfos control ability allow her to resurrect corpses? Take another look at the power and give it some love.
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When all this is done, go ahead and give yourself 6 more stat points for your history, respond here, and tag me on Discord, so I can view your edits.