Sky

[Sky]

Sky

Sometimes it is necessary to fight evil with evil,
You either die a hero, or live long enough to become the villain

Necromancer

Horon

Human

Wisdom

Female

19

Heterosexual

Wip

PERSONALITY

Sky is usually a calm and sombre person, refraining from excessive amount of emotion when around others, putting on a peaceful and neutral appearance. This is in attempts to look friendlier and hide her questionable magic practices, but also to just a general lack of casual social skills, spending a good majority of her life alone. Though not often good with people she is respectful to those older and more well versed in both magic's and other arts, willing to listen to whatever council they may have that could help her along in the future.



When she does show emotion is usually in the form of joy or anger. Though not easy to achieve Sky can be passionately joyful when bearing witness to a funny circumstance or when genitally having a good time. This is often awkward for her though and thus is usually followed by embarrassment over her action, more so if people are watching and notice the stark contrast to her usual persona.



Anger, on the other hand is much more easily obtainable form sky, mainly due to her take on the world and view of past and current problems which could be fix but are not due to those ruling or denial to use dark magic even if t would help considerably. Sky is also easily annoyed or pissed off when exposed to uncomfortable situations that she dislikes, and if pestered will not hesitate to lash out at the individual or person causing her discomfort.



In addition, she rarely shows sadness, as Sky has learned to accept that bad things happen and that it is best to move on and keep going, rather than needlessly cry over the past. On a more positive note, she is not oblivious to the unhappiness and suffering of others, and is more than able to comfort or consul when needed, offering usual advice.

LIKES [attr="class","scroll"] Sky prefers darker coloured clothes as she thinks it suits her use of magic more and  usually simple in design, (not just they are easier to wash) History, the past, religion and other trivial facts that affect a culture are of great interest to Sky, being one of her few past times. Sweets and other nice tasting treat, but is not the type to openly admitting she loves them. Dark magic and other forbidden arts that could be used in more constructive methods are her main focus. Quiet places away from large crowds, weather they be parks, a library graveyard or just general wild.

DISLIKES [attr="class","scroll"] Bright colours on flashy clothing or structures seems over the top and unnecessary to her. such dislikes those sorts of things Overly happy people who. seem to never take things seriously or who art to optimistic matter the situation they are in tend to annoy her easily. Noisy places that make her uncomfortable, bars or massive festivals and celebrations are not her thing.

MOTIVATIONS [attr="class","scroll"] To bring peace for Hyrule, no matter the cost of sacrifice that must be made. To attain power to rival that of evil and good alike, and to have a stake in the world. To each others that nothing is inherently bad, and what it is what you do that defines a person as good or evil.

FEARS [attr="class","scroll"] Punishment for her dark practices of magic, and thus being shunned by people or hunted down. Her powers being manipulated and used for evil via someone else, and causing unwanted destruction. Possibly coming under the influence of evil and losing her free will.

HISTORY

The chaos of the war that had preceded her time had left much destruction in the wake of Sky growing up, orphaned at a young age, and struggling to stay financially a float in the dark days. Though poor and with not real form of education the young girl had taken to reading a writing the old fashion way learning from others around her. With not much else to do with her time Sky had studied fervently in the history of Hyrule and the arcane art, though unfortunately most magic texts where reserved for the higher up, the only texts available for her were that of the dark arts.

Upon reaching the age of 15 Sky went on her own way, leaving Horon in her purist of dark magic not caring if the art was forbidden and view down upon, in her mind such skills could still prove to be useful to those in need and could protect those who where unable to protect themselves. Such a view was further enforced when reading up on the battle between the forces of evil and reaching Hyrule itself the place under control of tyrannical guild. In her mind the use of necromancy and the dark arts would have been a great asset to the Hylians a humans during such a war, as well as allow Zelda to retain her power and prevent such problems happening.

For the last few years Sky has been perfecting her art in black magic, developing a spell to allow her control over Stalfos and creating her own to be used in battle. Adopting the Sythe as a weapon for it connection with with spirits, most notable the Poes that wander the land. Using her new found servants to train the woman to a respectable level, able to ward of bandits and raiders allowing her to keep the dark arts hidden.

As of now Sky wanders Hyrule, where she thinks her skills a best needed despite adversity and possible persecution, unbeknownst to herself teetering on the brink of good and bad.

APPEARANCE

Sky is a average height woman for her age, being roughly 170cm tall and around 60kg, she has dark purplish eyes. This is accompanied with long straight, flowing black hair with a pointed fringe and fair/slightly pale skin. Also she bears a sword scar across her left eye from a fight with a strick goddess worshiper, believing that she should be executed for her use in magic.

Her clothing mainly details dark black and grey clothing, often with purple edges here and there, as well as some minor types of jewellery. In addition she usually wears glove and a black cloak with a hood built in, but is not often used, unless the situation calls for it.

INVENTORY

WEAPON

Rank: Common
Type: Scythe
Handling: Two hand/Pole arm
Description: Sky's scythe is approximately 155cm long, with leather hand grips in the middle, the staff being a dark brown cut into 50 cm lengths with pin lock telescopic effect. The blade is roughly 100 cm long, long and straight with a dark tinge a polish to it, a small round pick sticking out the back at 10cm, similar to a call hammer. The curved blade is attached to the staff via a lockable hing allowing the blade to be folded to the side, for easy storage, combined with the telescopic staff allows Sky to carry it around on her back, hidden for view..

MAGIC

MAGIC TYPE: Arcane
NAME: Cavorting Bones
RANK: Common
CLASS: Support
DURATION/COOLDOWN: 5 seconds to cast, 20 second cool down, for already function Stalfo (can cast 2 per post 1 post cool down). 20 seconds to cast, 60 seconds for new Stalfo (1 per post, 1 post cool down, though  varies depending on materials used and size), limit of 5 Stalfo under control at once can last until end of thread depending on circumstances.

This spell function by infusing an already wandering Stlafo with a crude temporary soul tied to Skys own being. In creating of a new Stalfo warrior she forces the artificial sole into the bones, forging them together allowing the skeleton to stand up and move around. This takes more time and energy, but makes a more loyal warrior as wandering Stalfos often have lingering minds of who they once were. This may cause them to attack Sky if her control over them weakens.

Upon summoning the skeletal warriors will act like an attack dogs, staying close to Sky, her emotions effecting their behavior. If she is felt threatened or is in danger by someone or something the Stalfo will react defensibly. If Sky is aggressive or attacking someone the Stalfo with be on the offensive and will engaging her target, or those she feels are her enemies.

Restrictions: Must be in an area where Stalfos are present, or can be present, or where there are enough hylian/human/zora etc remains to form a functioning skeleton. (E.g. legs arms and torso at minimum).

DESCRIPTION: A skill that allow Sky to control a common Stalfo and make it serve her. Or with extra energy and time raise a dead body, alternatively combine an amalgamate bones and other materials to form an un-dead warrior to fight for her. Such being stays attached to her unless she herself is greatly distracted, harmed or she dispels the warrior, though control over the warrior slowly uses up mana.

TRAITS

Diplomacy: Apprentice
Social Etiquette: Journeyman 
Intimidation: Journeyman 
Persuasion: Apprentice 
Tactics/Leadership: Apprentice
History/Religion: Adept 
Geography: Apprentice
Arcana: Adept
Weapon Proficiency: Adept
Hand to Hand: Journeyman 
Endurance: Journeyman 
Stealth: Adept 
Acrobatics: Apprentice 
Horse Riding: Apprentice 
Alchemy: Apprentice
 

PLAYER ALIAS: Gdsryrox
FACE CLAIM: No name Tumbler Art
REFERENCE: Searched it myself
ALTS: NA
Jade

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[Jade]

Editing time!

you're close, but not quite there yet

LET'S GET DOWN TO BUSINESS

Alrighty, we've got some work to do. You have a good start, but you need a little bit more to inch yourself over that finish line. 

The first thing that stands out to me is there are parts of your profile that you seemed to have forgotten to complete, including, but not limited to, your weapon description. Let's go ahead and add the rest of the relevant information to those.

In addition, I spotted some grammatical issue in the app itself. I'm stuck on mobile right now, so I can't give every example, but here's one that stands out especially.

"Though despite this sadness is a rarely shown by her, Sky coming to accept that bad things happen and that it is best to move on and keep going then needlessly cry over the past."

This either seems like two thoughts mashed together, or one thought poorly worded. It also bounces between past and present tense. 

A good example of fixing this would be:

"Though she rarely shows this sadness, Sky has learned to accept that bad things happen and that it is best to move on and keep going, rather than needlessly cry over the past."

In addition, you did not meet word count minimum on personality. Revise that.


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With that, the major stuff is out of the way, so there's a couple minor nitpicks.

1) You must have a kingdom listen. It needs not be who you serve, but it does need to be where your character hails from.

2) Your stalfos raising ability can lose the seconds on them, and you can just use the post duration instead. This is a personal question myself, but what happens if she has no access to skeletons or bones in general? Can she just not raise stalfos? Also, how does a stalfos control ability allow her to resurrect corpses? Take another look at the power and give it some love.

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When all this is done, go ahead and give yourself 6 more stat points for your history, respond here, and tag me on Discord, so I can view your edits.

[DEBISIS]

Accepted!